tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1054131554892649240.post7908893381495950978..comments2023-11-02T02:29:27.214-07:00Comments on Ethen's NBA Blog@ALC: Chapter 1ASC4@ ALChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09081558760687351714noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1054131554892649240.post-46892132461677746772008-01-07T02:30:00.000-08:002008-01-07T02:30:00.000-08:00Good start Ethen. I hope you can add more to the s...Good start Ethen. I hope you can add more to the story in the second chapter. I'm curious to see what happens to Michael as he begins his new school life. <BR/>One thing. If Mrs. Brown is Michael's mother, you should say so. Or introduce Michael as Michael Brown and say his age, etc.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com